poor little upside-down cake...your bottom's on your top.

laugardagur, september 23, 2006

Settembre de venti-trei, due mille e sei

I am having a "totaly inspiring" week. I wrote two new poems in one day! I don't think I've ever written more than one in a day before.
I only have one with me so I'll post the other one some other time.

Beautiful you
the picture of youth
sooth my seeking eyes

I watch you
like bright petals
clear frangrance of love and life

But my eyes
they see your youth
it is slipping away from me

I knew it would
yet I didn't realize
the pain of your vanishing

I thought
satisfied I would be
with one short mortal life

In eternity
I will always live
but not wholy, for you are gone

What meaning
true meaning has life
without you here with me?

We walked
in the moonlight
love kept us warm in the dark

Even darkness
seemed as light
to our lovng souls

I whispered
your name was to me
as honey on my lips

I looked
deeply gazed at you
your eyes met mine

I'll never
oh, not will I ever
forget the mirror of those eyes

Now all
you are in everything
why does my life continue?

The wind
it whisperes your name
it echoes my dying heart

And yet
life still pulses thorough me
I will remember, but never love again

4 ummæli:

thefreak sagði...

You wanna know my honest opinion?

I think your poetry is good. =) Mushy, but it's good. haha

Chrysler sagði...

Well, thanks.
It was inspired by a quizilla test...beleive it or not.

Thanks for your honest opinion.
But they're not all mushy

Chrysler sagði...

Well, thanks.
It was inspired by a quizilla test...beleive it or not.

Thanks for your honest opinion.
But they're not all mushy

Chrysler sagði...

I don't know why it put it twice. Weird.