A Noble (or not so noble) Confession

New...but not improved. Well here it is...I said I'd post it before too long.

A desperate attempt at recapturing a lost moment, reliving a lost dream, rewriting a lost poem:

I think of you
as I gaze accross the stars
Even though we're far apart
I can feel your presence

Across wide galaxies
through endless time
Our love will keep us together
I will come back to you

When I see your eyes
your love shines through
Forever gazing accross the skies
I dream of us together once more

I see your hurt, pain
what is it my love?
we once were together
even when accross the stars

I see your life fail and wain
before me you lie, pleading
What have I done?
Is our forever so short?

Is it my fault,
the cause of your sorrow?
Oh my love! If ever you again
can reach to me accross the heavens

I will hear you
if I can ever make up for the loss
I know I can't, I've done so wrong
Nothing can fix it, but I beg mercy

I will turn again
to the path I once trod
To the deeds I once knew
I will try to make right

But alas! For my poor soul
it is too late to bring you back
When now I gaze and search the stars
I no longer see your smiling face

Only my memory
can replay the image of you
When I was once your love and all
I have failed, but perhaps we my meet

When beyond the stars
and spaces between I travel
then may I find you again
And again hold you, my love

Feb. 18th 2007

I don't like the way I ended it...it really is rather abrupt. Well...I'll just have to get over it I guess.
S'long,
Chrysler

p.s. Shouldn't there be a line somewhere about "not living without you"? lol